Week 11 Story: The Hare and the Lynx (and the Beast)

Arctic Hare (Wikimedia)

The Hare and the Lynx (and the Beast) 

            Some days ago, in a forest much like any other, a little white hare lived in a warm den with her Grandmother. They lived a happy life together tending their crops and harvesting from the forest. When the young hare had nearly reached adulthood, her Grandmother told her that she must make a pilgrimage to her native land. She was too old to accompany the young hare, but assured Hare she would be with her on her journey.

            As Hare traveled down the trail she was invigorated by the exploration of new lands. Having never traveled far from her home, the new sights and smells were almost too much. But as Hare reveled in adventure, a sinister shadow lurked close behind. Hare continued to soak in her surroundings until she was lost in thought. The shadow had waited for just this moment. At once, Lynx leapt from the trees and blocked Hare’s path.

The Lynx sang:

"Where, pretty white one,

Where, pretty white one,

Where do you go?"

“Tshwee! Tshwee! Tshwee! Tshwee!” cried Hare. But her grandmother’s voice told her, “Have courage! Tell Lynx you are going to your native land!” and this comforted her.

Hare gathered all of her courage and chanted:

"To my homeland,

To my homeland,

I am going to my homeland!"

The Lynx disagreed:

“Never come down this path,

Never come down this path,

Or I’ll eat you up!"

Hare ran into the trees and found the nearest place to hide. Her heart was racing, but her Grandmother came to her again and told her, “Be creative young one! You must scare the one you fear. Build yourself a costume so that you might become the Beast!’

And so the young hare built a costume that made her look like the most ferocious beast to ever walk the forest. She waited until nightfall and hid by the path.

When the Lynx came down the trail he called out:

"Little white one,

Little white one,

Were you brave enough to return?"

At once, Hare leapt out from the trees and blocked Lynx’s path.

The Beast bellowed:

"Loathsome Lynx,

Loathsome Lynx,

Leave this forest forever or I’ll eat you up!"

“Tshwee! Tshwee! Tshwee! Tshwee!” cried Lynx, and he ran off into the hills never to be seen again.

To this day, the Lynx is still fearful by nature, living as a hermit hidden from mankind. All because a brave young hare stood up to a tyrant, with some help from her Grandmother and a Beast.


Author’s Note: 
In the original version of this story, a young hare tries to return to her homeland but is confronted by a Lynx three times. Each time the Lynx sings, the hare runs and tells her Grandmother, and the Grandmother gives her some advice and sends her back. The Grandmother’s final advice is to not mind the Lynx, which the hare does, and then the Lynx eats her. I like the patterned repetition of song like dialogue in this story, and that aspect of the story I condensed and kept. I also wanted to use it more like dialogue, rather than repetition of just the Lynx’s words, so I made some responses for the hare. I had the Grandmother deliver her messages in a Yoda like manner to prevent redundancy. I wanted a more positive ending, so I had the hare solve her own problem by scaring the Lynx away. I thought this would also give the story an “origin story” feel for the Lynx, explaining why they are so reclusive.

Comments

  1. Hi Drew!
    I really liked the dialogue in this story and how the Lynx and Rabbit’s conversations were kind of musical and different. I haven’t read the original story, but after reading the authors note, I think I would like your story ending better. I also like how you turned your new ending into an origin of why the Lynx is reclusive! It was super creative. I wish there was a little more description about the Hare’s Beast costume, but overall it was a great story!

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  2. Hey Drew!

    I love how this story was almost like a nursery rhyme or song. I also like that the hare was the victor over the lynx. It is cute that it got help from its grandmother scare the lynx away. The disguise to be a beast is a smart idea and I am glad that it worked so it would no longer be bullied by the lynx.

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  3. Hi Drew! I really enjoyed reading your story. I hadn’t heard of The Hare and the Lynx before, so this was all new to me. I think that the way you interpreted and rewrote the story was great. Being able to add your own touches like having the song be more like dialogue was great! I also really enjoyed that you made the ending more positive. Great job!

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  4. Hi Drew! I like how the repetition of lines feels very typical of some animal tales. I loved the ending of your story, and how you use the same line that Hare said at the beginning to show the shifting roles between Hare and Lynx. I like your ending much better than the original... I think I would have been really sad if Hare had been eaten.

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